Dug this a lot. It's a wonder to me how readily the mass majority accepted constant surveillance in our homes through our phones and doorbell cameras and televisions...and how inconvenient it is to live without these things now. (Not the door cameras though, fuck those.)
this is so punk rock. Absolutely love how brutal it is. Well done. I want everyone to read this.
Ah thanks hard to know if it goes too far with these ones.
WHO CARES!?!?!?!? LET'S PUNCH SHIT!
Bahaha always ❤️👊
I was thinking about how to best describe this and I think punk rock is actually the best way
Amazing! Throw some beats and attitude on this, cross Kraftwerk with Slim Shady and I think you have something iconic here. Pure genius.
So well done. Maybe I don't actually mind if the murderous robot has an Aussie accent.
Haha thanks Nav, at least an Aussie death robot understands mateship 😅
Oh this is the hard truth. Loved this perspective!
Yeah in a little hard on this one.. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment 😌
Dug this a lot. It's a wonder to me how readily the mass majority accepted constant surveillance in our homes through our phones and doorbell cameras and televisions...and how inconvenient it is to live without these things now. (Not the door cameras though, fuck those.)
Yeah tell me about it man. I just can’t help but think of all the deals being made right now behind closed doors that determine our future.
Loved this little taste of a dystopia in verse. I could see a novel or novella or novelette in verse for this!
Thanks Lee, it was fun to try and build poems into a narrative story. I’ll definitely experiment with it more in the future 🤔