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Jeff Harrington/InsideSkyChant's avatar

I had to read this because of the title! And it's great!

Alex Jenkin's avatar

Thank you kindly 🤘

Izabella 💌's avatar

Coming back to poetry just shining! Loved the images and the power in the simplicity of this poem. 💜

Alex Jenkin's avatar

Naw thanks so much, thats lovely to say ☺️

Messy Ink Poetry's avatar

This is so beautiful. I know you've had a bit of a poetry drought but if this is what comes out of it then it was worth it!

Alex Jenkin's avatar

Naw thanks you are best! I won’t even mention my shame about Friday.. 😅

RM Greta's avatar

Beautiful and tender. The first two lines struck me with emotion as did the last two. What a great effect!

Alex Jenkin's avatar

Ah thanks, simple but I kind of liked it. I’m starting the great purge of my notes app 😅.

Bea's avatar

I love this so much. Tea in hand, savoring a sip of the universe. 🖤

Alex Jenkin's avatar

Haha thanks Bea!

Celia (aka Afterforever) ✨🎵's avatar

I love this, Alex. A universe in a teacup, a heartbeat in the stars. Simple, yet it warms the belly and the soul. 🌙☕💫

Alex Jenkin's avatar

Haha thanks Celia!

Celia (aka Afterforever) ✨🎵's avatar

Hehe, you're so welcome, Alex 😊

HEW(Hue) of Poetry's avatar

Oooooh those last two lines are so succinct and perfect. Definitely seems like a last scene in the movie capper.

Alex Jenkin's avatar

Thanks man, tried to keep it short but with a bit of depth I guess. I don’t know that one I’ll have to check it out 🤓

Jonathan Davis's avatar

very nice Alex

your talent is surprising ;)

Alex Jenkin's avatar

Thank you kindly! I’ll have to work on first impressions so the talent is less surprising 😂